English, or Chinese?,English, or Chinese?范文(2)
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当前,英语热在中国各大高校有愈演愈烈之势,极端者甚至提出大学课程应当全部用英语教授。对此王昕同学分析了中英文各自不可替代的作用,并指出:中文作为中国传统文化的精髓,中华民族的生存之本,是不容忽视的。
文章构思新颖,立意不凡。开篇先用写剧本的手法描写了两幕场景:用英语教授的西方经济学课和同样用英语教授的中国文学课,令读者眼前一亮,引起了强烈的阅读欲望,随之自然引出中心议题。本文的议论也相当流畅,采用分层论证的方式,分别用问句导出中英文各自的作用,再举例证明,或逻辑推理,最后水到渠成地得出结论。
不足之处在于,上半部分论证翻译的作用时,有几句体现出作者思维不够连贯,可以加一连接词承接。此外,论述过程中句型若能增加些变化,则文章会更生动可读。
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