The Life in Fudan,The Life in Fudan范文(2)
当然，段落清晰，结构分明，也是本文的一大优点。可能是出于个人写作风格，作者有点偏爱排比的修辞手段，但对同义词的排比如germs and bacteria，devoted and industrious等最好适当控制，语言就更上一层楼了。
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