A Road of Love and Memory(2)

      That was the second day of the death of our famous head master  Su, Buqing.  When I went running one morning to the XiangHui Hall, I was hit by a special scene. Hundreds of paper cranes are hanging on the trees along the sides of the road, white and yellow, all delicately hand made, fluttering in the wind. Among them there were also small notes with words that expressed our love and respect for the headmaster. I was deeply moved. In my eyes, the road had never been as beautiful as it was that very morning. And my affection for it has since deepened a lot.
     I love walking along the road, as it＇s really nice to have a road of love and memory in the campus.

简  评
    校园生活永远多姿多彩、浪漫绮丽，因为它是所有学子年少青春的见证，也是所有人内心深处的一片温馨。俞沛贞同学以其细腻的笔触婉婉描述了一个浪漫名称的由来，描述了年轻学子的浪漫奇想与真挚。
    本文从介绍小路的实际位置入手，引出故事并加以自己的评论，结构十分明朗；另外，作者选词也在精确的同时做到了多样化，使全文读来如春风拂面，感觉清新无比。